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Post by rippledstream// Spiritcry on Oct 8, 2007 19:56:29 GMT
Stormstar tom 23 moons Leader of RiverClan Long-haired , gray tabby Green eyes Funny, Caring, smart, loyal, cunning, brave, Rippledstream she-cat 23 moons Warrior of ThunderClan Long-haired brown tabby with silver, orange and white markings Amber eyes Smart, swift, sneaky, loyal, adorable, Wolves Spiritcry female 25 moons deputy Oceanpack Silver,brown and white coat with black tail tip Black eyes Smart, cunning, swift, gentle, brave , fierce in battle and
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Post by ___ookami. on Oct 8, 2007 21:55:09 GMT
Umm, seeing as Silenty hasn't let me know if I'm allowed to accept bios or not, I'm going to simply make a comment on these characters. The appearance and personality aren't very discriptive, seeing as they are only lists.
Persona;; Do they like to play? What do they think when around other of their blood? Do they like the life they lead? Just tell us what they like/think, that kind of stuff.
Appearance;; Do they have a short tail? Long tail? Big ears? Give us little details about them. Heck, you could even add something in there for some spice. Impress us!
These are just suggestions, forgive me if I sound picky. *hug*
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Post by Falconfeather on Oct 9, 2007 18:50:02 GMT
You need to put them in the bio section XD otherwise good!
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Post by rippledstream// Spiritcry on Oct 9, 2007 18:51:47 GMT
oupps sorry ill do that now!
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Post by Falconfeather on Oct 9, 2007 18:59:49 GMT
XD
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